MY SELF EVALUATION
What I think I have done well is, adding in the main features of what a magazine should have. For an example masthead, barcode etc. However, not everything is perfect therefore, there is still a lot of improvements meant to be made. Firstly, starting off with the sub lines, I think the placing is right, however it doesn't have much content and doesn't really dive in to what the articles might actually be about. Another possible improvement could be the font and colour choice. But I have attempted to keep the colour choice from my logo into my magazine.I decided to take a picture of the student in a way that it gave space for the sublines by the sides and for additional stuff and not look messy. However, as said before I agree and believe the mid-shot should be bigger.
In addition, I have also added a logo with the same colours as the actual LSC logo. But I have changed it a bit but as was said before to make it bigger as well which I can see that as an improvement as it would make it look better.
Furthermore, the rest of the things including sublines and flash made it and coloured according to my logo which is that dark blue and dark yellow. But font should be different and probably going to make the main title stand out more.
Clean clear happy photograph in the centre of your front page, which in turn compliments the smirk and sly lion theme associated with puma, the fiery font and the quotation, "size doesn't matter".
ReplyDeleteHowever, the coverlines are limited and do not contain much content on what is possibly included within your magazine.
Your front cover is very well presented. however, you should use only 3 colours which would make your work look better
ReplyDeletevery appealing cover picture but u should make ur headline more bigger
ReplyDeleteWhere is the evaluation? And the distribution task? Vanessa
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