I have made a little progress on my contents page, I've trying to consolidate the positioning and the content inside the double page spread, I still need to add a lot of things and make a lot of improvement. There's a lot of white space and too simple, looks more like a newspaper article rather than a magazine article. Also the positioning of the model, plus the pose is not suitable, I think it should be closer image of the model. But so far it looks really boring.
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